15:00:02 #startmeeting Magazine editorial board 15:00:02 Meeting started Thu Aug 12 15:00:02 2021 UTC. 15:00:02 This meeting is logged and archived in a public location. 15:00:02 The chair is glb. Information about MeetBot at http://wiki.debian.org/MeetBot. 15:00:02 Useful Commands: #action #agreed #halp #info #idea #link #topic. 15:00:02 The meeting name has been set to 'magazine_editorial_board' 15:00:03 #meetingname magazine 15:00:03 The meeting name has been set to 'magazine' 15:00:03 #topic Roll call 15:00:04 #chair glb rlengland theevilskeleton cverna asamalik 15:00:04 Current chairs: asamalik cverna glb rlengland theevilskeleton 15:00:10 .hello glb 15:00:10 glb: glb 'Gregory Lee Bartholomew' 15:00:22 #topic Agenda 15:00:23 #link https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/fedora-magazine/workflow/ 15:00:23 #info -- 1/ Last week's stats -- 15:00:24 #info -- 2/ In progress followup -- 15:00:24 #info -- 3/ Finished articles to review -- 15:00:25 #info -- 4/ Articles to edit -- 15:00:25 #info -- 5/ Publishing schedule -- 15:00:26 #info -- 6/ Editor of the Week -- 15:00:26 #info -- 7/ Open floor -- 15:00:27 #topic 1/ Last week's stats 15:00:27 #info Week of August 2: 54.4K pageviews -- low but study 15:00:28 #topic 2/ In progress followup 15:00:28 #info Looking at the 'in progress' column, is there something that's been finished? Anything to follow up on with its author? 15:00:29 #link Board: https://teams.fedoraproject.org/project/asamalik-fedora-magazine/kanban 15:00:29 #info Are there any upcoming test days? 15:00:30 #link https://calendar.fedoraproject.org/QA/ 15:00:30 Nope. 15:00:31 #info Review release schedule 15:03:15 .hello theevilskeleton 15:03:18 TheEvilSkeleton: theevilskeleton 'TheEvilSkeleton' 15:03:30 Hi TheEvilSkeleton! 15:03:37 Hello, how are you? 15:03:51 Doing great! 15:04:01 Are you up for editing more articles? 15:04:36 Sure 15:05:09 The next one to be done is #340. 15:05:21 It needs to go out tomorrow at 08:00 UTC. 15:05:32 It looks like it is pretty close to ready. 15:05:49 I see at least on "Fedora" that should be changed to "Fedora Linux". 15:06:05 Looking at #340, the editor is rlengland 15:06:27 Do I change my username or do I just append? 15:06:31 * Do I change to my username or do I just append? 15:07:02 Yeah, rlengland already made a "partial" pass at editing the article. 15:07:17 It looks like he missed just a few things. 15:07:29 Yes, go ahead and change the editor to your name. 15:07:31 Okay. Do I replace his username with mine or do I add mine? 15:07:38 Okay 15:08:08 I'm starting now 15:08:16 Please also fix the display of the author's name in WP if you can. 15:08:32 It should show their full name -- first, then last. 15:09:50 Also, try to remove the first person "we" when you see it. 15:10:14 The articles should not appear to be speaking on behalf of the Fedora Project. 15:10:17 glb: Hmm.. I just tried but I can't do that 15:10:29 OK, I'll fix the username. 15:10:33 It just replaces with another username 15:10:34 Thank you 15:11:28 So the first line of the article should be changed from "In this article we will explore ..." to "This article will explore ...". 15:11:40 Yup, I was just changing that 15:12:30 "Let's" is also a sort of hidden first person -- it is a contraction for "Let us". 15:12:54 It is also passive voice. 15:13:17 I would change "Let’s start by creating a Fedora 34 ..." to "Start by creating a Fedora 34 ...". 15:13:33 Anyway, I'm sure you'll figure it out. :-) 15:14:51 Let's not forget to avoid future tense :P 15:15:38 The future tense is appropreate sometimes. 15:16:17 Overall, the article is pretty good. Really, what I mentioned is about all I would change. 15:16:49 You will also need to create an image for the article. 15:16:51 I'm just skimming through to see if there are typos and such 15:17:55 Ouch. I don't think I'll have time for that before the meeting ends because I have to work in an hour 15:18:34 OK. I'll do the image. 15:20:30 I've moved the rest of the cards to 'to edit'. 15:21:05 Since many of the editors are 'on holiday', we'll assign them asynchronously. 15:21:24 #topic 5/ Publishing schedule 15:21:25 #info Looking at the 'queued' and 'to edit' columns, decide the publishing schedule for the next week period. 15:21:25 #info If there is not enough content, we might also need to look at the 'in progress' or even the 'article spec' columns come up with additional content. 15:21:26 #link Board: https://teams.fedoraproject.org/project/asamalik-fedora-magazine/kanban 15:24:18 glb: can you check if #340 is good? 15:24:59 I see one problem -- "this article will use the dnf commands inside toolbox" isn't quite right. 15:25:06 articles don't "use" things. 15:25:35 maybe "this article will demo running dnf commands ... 15:26:26 Okay, fixed 15:26:52 Thanks. I think it is pretty good now. 15:26:56 I will take care of the image. 15:27:09 Okay, and I will improve the SEO a bit 15:29:49 Don't worry too much about the SEO. It is probably better to not over-edit the article if it is otherwise OK. 15:30:27 It is not always possible to make the SEO happy. :-) 15:33:45 #proposed PUBLISHING SCHEDULE: Fri 13 Aug 2021: #340 Using dnf updateinfo to read update changelog (image: glb, edit: theevilskeleton) -- Mon 16 Aug 2021: #353 Barrier Introduction (image: TBD, edit: TBD) -- Wed 18 Aug 2021: #341 below: An interactive resource monitor for modern Linux systems (image: TBD, edit: TBD) 15:33:47 Lol yeah, SEO is super picky 15:33:50 +1 15:34:13 TheEvilSkeleton: I see that this author is using a lot of long sentences. 15:34:21 Btw my sister just called me. I have to prepare some food before working 15:34:32 Idk if I'll come back or not. Sorry 15:34:35 OK, see you later. 15:34:53 #agreed PUBLISHING SCHEDULE: Fri 13 Aug 2021: #340 Using dnf updateinfo to read update changelog (image: glb, edit: theevilskeleton) -- Mon 16 Aug 2021: #353 Barrier Introduction (image: TBD, edit: TBD) -- Wed 18 Aug 2021: #341 below: An interactive resource monitor for modern Linux systems (image: TBD, edit: TBD) 15:36:08 #topic 6/ Editor of the Week 15:36:29 #info glb will be Editor of the Week next week 15:36:42 #topic 7/ Open floor 15:36:48 #endmeeting